The feedbacks I recieved during my tutorials are constructive and encourage me to go further with my investigation. When I presented my first stage of investigation, where I looked at the color study, pattern study, and mapping of my site, the feedbacks I recieved were generally wanting to see more of how the people interacts with the space and look deeper, not just on the visual surface. My tutorial group suggested me to study the consumer behavior and suggested that I could take more notes in addition to my photographs.
At my second stage presentation, I was able to showcase more information through animation sketches and edited videos. During this conversation, it was interesting for me to see that my coursemates are relating back to my initial visual research (color study) and how the studies could be incorporated together for a more extensive study. Some of the common comments raised were 1) How accurate is the animation? 2) Room for more details 3) Loosen up and bring in the chaos of the space.