Unit 2 Feedback

Not working

when you talk through this section of project; not sure how much you got out of it.

you sort in different category 

but not clear what things stand out to you

the pattern? the grammar? what’s interested for you

Go Further 

the form in some of the button stand out in ur collection(non-circle ones)

How shape of the pin affect the content and meaning of the content

find the actual slogans; statements about someone or other, linguistic techniques; faces are translated into just shadow.

small subtle details in the design; a way of translating

looking more closely on the detail of your material. 

what do you find interesting from sorting?

what’s the purpose here? emphasis the slogan- is this enough; what can you do more that emphasis the slogan?

exaggeration? formally (scale, text, color)

take the content and represent it.

rearrange the texts; cut out; reprint; 

how scale, images, text, overplay,

the president pin – they look similar but what additionally you want us to look at? their smile, the form?

collection book/ scrab book (good idea) : layering of images and notations, newspaper cutting, not bound properly, collecting fragments, own caption system, handmade 

isolate- reconfiguring  

What’s not working about last method?

don’t know what you trying to say

whats the purpose 

how it connects to the pervious experiment

speak more to making order and compositions 

not critically engaged 

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